Would like Opinions for my recent Photoshops :)
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Re: Would like Opinions for my recent Photoshops :)
Ohhhh right, your first sentence threw me off a bit. Idk I was really confused when i thought you said " and it doesn't help that I know the originals of all the images used, hehe. " for both the images. Anyway yeah like i said about the bold part about the effects i had it nulled down and a bit more unnoticeable in the start but when my art teacher told me he liked it better with the effects sharper i assumed it was prob the best choice x) also thanks for the comments feedback is very helpful because even though i prob won't go and fix it up now, in my new artworks il put stuff like that into consideration.
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xNFx Monsta
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Sorry about the misunderstanding, I did mean I know the originals to all the images used, but i did say 'used'. Like the landscapes ext.
I'm always happy to spread some positive input.
Oh, and try to be yourself when working on graphics. If it looks good to you, it probably will to others. I'm not saying don't take advice, just don't think too hard, let your mind do what you want. After all, your just as human as anyone else.
I'm always happy to spread some positive input.
Oh, and try to be yourself when working on graphics. If it looks good to you, it probably will to others. I'm not saying don't take advice, just don't think too hard, let your mind do what you want. After all, your just as human as anyone else.
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Njls
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well I did go back and remove the effects from the planet and i added a bit of a blue glow/fade around it, Also i went back and did some major fix ups on the halo ring manipulation as well :P
Updated link below for that:
https://i.servimg.com/u/f38/18/74/12/41/wonder22.jpg
Im not going to re-upload the planet one as the changes are pretty minuscule compared to wonder 21
Updated link below for that:
https://i.servimg.com/u/f38/18/74/12/41/wonder22.jpg
Im not going to re-upload the planet one as the changes are pretty minuscule compared to wonder 21
xNFx Monsta
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We have a more justified atmosphere indeed. And the relaxed tone of the modded lighting gives a sharper concept of what that level of height might look like if a biome was created on an inverted sphere.
Good amend. I'd say you have made for the better here.
Good amend. I'd say you have made for the better here.
Njls
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I am not familiar with this kind of stuff, but there are few things that catch my eye.
I'll start with wonder 21/22.
Now to the Wonder 19.
They are very inspiring landscapes though. With some work on more interesting 3D and perspective these could be pretty mindblowing. Sorry, giving feedback on art shouldn't be something to do straight from the bed lol.
This is not exactly on the pictures themselves, but do you optimize your pictures before uploading them? Even for a .jpg the quality is pretty bad.
I'll start with wonder 21/22.
- Spoiler:
- Wonder 21/22 feedback:
- This is pretty much first picture that I found when googling "Halo ring". And while this and your picture have pretty different perspective, I think that your Halo ring looks too small. The terrain of the upper ring is a lot more visible in your picture.
Second thing is that the terrain stops very aggressively. The mountains seem to just out of nowhere cut their corners to stay inside the ring. I'd say to just make them smaller or not be too absolute about them. This same kind of thing shows in the biggest mountain in middle, where it doesn't seem to curve accordingly at all and then its top just suddenly disappears.
Third thing is that the texture of the little bit upper mountains is very different to the other mountains. The contrast splits my attention.
Now to the Wonder 19.
- Wonder 19 feedback:
- If the planet you have in water is life sized, then its perspective would conflict pretty heavily with the location of the horizon line. I think the horizon line should be moved little bit down, or the planet moved little bit more center. In your small rez picture this is little bit less obvious.
Secondly, I think that those shapes in the planet don't look good at all. They don't curve at all, they take a lot of 3D out of the planet and it almost looks flat. I think they need a lot more curve, or I'd prefer if they were not there at all. They look better on the low rez though, mostly because they are so much less obvious.
They are very inspiring landscapes though. With some work on more interesting 3D and perspective these could be pretty mindblowing. Sorry, giving feedback on art shouldn't be something to do straight from the bed lol.
This is not exactly on the pictures themselves, but do you optimize your pictures before uploading them? Even for a .jpg the quality is pretty bad.
Apsuli
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Thanks for pointing all of those things out, its very helpful! especially the points about the perspective of the ring. Im going to try tomorrow to go fix all those things up and see how it looks then :) I agree with with how you said the mountains end pretty abruptly as well but i just cant wrap my head around how i can fix that :L so its just going to be a lot of trial and error :P
Thanks again for the post!
Thanks again for the post!
xNFx Monsta
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I like the way you have the size aspect, it's not accurate (given a halo ring is 198 miles wide), however it makes for a very unique fan creation.
I do agree with Apsuli though. Optimization of the different landscapes would be a strong one-up.
I do agree with Apsuli though. Optimization of the different landscapes would be a strong one-up.
Njls
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Hey guys I decided to make another Photoshop speed art video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gr2Z1oH2QaY
Would appreciate some feedback on this piece :)
Would appreciate some feedback on this piece :)
xNFx Monsta
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xNFx Monsta wrote:Hey guys I decided to make another Photoshop speed art video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gr2Z1oH2QaY
Would appreciate some feedback on this piece :)
I've responded on YT vid ;D
lolslayer
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Stryking wrote:Should be a higher res
lol, u probs the least responding developer I've ever seen here
lolslayer
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lolslayer wrote:Stryking wrote:Should be a higher res
lol, u probs the least responding developer I've ever seen here
He's too busy developing
Neesy
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Don't think about the campaign yet!!!
All i want is Multiplayer,Campaign is the later part....for this Fanmade game for sure.
Although i will be Pretty much Happy if u give us ONLY Multiplayer :D
All i want is Multiplayer,Campaign is the later part....for this Fanmade game for sure.
Although i will be Pretty much Happy if u give us ONLY Multiplayer :D
Abdul Fatir
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Abdul Fatir wrote:Don't think about the campaign yet!!!
All i want is Multiplayer,Campaign is the later part....for this Fanmade game for sure.
Although i will be Pretty much Happy if u give us ONLY Multiplayer :D
We will be MORE happy with the campaign ;D
lolslayer
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These look so amazing I forgot my horrible experiences of bullet magnetism and OP Promethean weapons in Halo 4!
The_Judge
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wow... just wow...The_Judge wrote:These look so amazing I forgot my horrible experiences of bullet magnetism and OP Promethean weapons in Halo 4!
lolslayer
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Is someone butthurt. ;)lolslayer wrote:wow... just wow...The_Judge wrote:These look so amazing I forgot my horrible experiences of bullet magnetism and OP Promethean weapons in Halo 4!
General_101
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yeah k ;(General_101 wrote:Is someone butthurt. ;)lolslayer wrote:wow... just wow...The_Judge wrote:These look so amazing I forgot my horrible experiences of bullet magnetism and OP Promethean weapons in Halo 4!
lolslayer
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It would be cool if 343 made filters like these!
DreuxPhoenix
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DreuxPhoenix wrote:It would be cool if 343 made filters like these!
maybe ;D
lolslayer
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DreuxPhoenix wrote:It would be cool if 343 made filters like these!
It would be cool if 343 like ended and frank o'conner went to treyarch
Neesy
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Neesy wrote:DreuxPhoenix wrote:It would be cool if 343 made filters like these!
It would be cool if 343 like ended and frank o'conner went to treyarch
It would be cool if people start hating on 343 and acknowledge that they did huntthetruth brilliantly
also, it would be cool if ppl stopped using colour texts ;), not only you, CPsnap too, god damn it's annoying, maybe I should use colours because I feel special
lolslayer
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lolslayer wrote:Neesy wrote:DreuxPhoenix wrote:It would be cool if 343 made filters like these!
It would be cool if 343 like ended and frank o'conner went to treyarch
It would be cool if people start hating on 343 and acknowledge that they did huntthetruth brilliantly
also, it would be cool if ppl stopped using colour texts ;), not only you, CPsnap too, god damn it's annoying, maybe I should use colours because I feel special
I think you meant to say "it would be cool if people STOPPED hating on 343"
anyways so what if people don't like 343? Halo 4 was mediocre imo, which in turn dumbs down my hype for halo 5. Sure hunt the truth is great but it's not the game, it's a story, anyone can think up a good story and not execute it well in the game.
Also, we went over the colored texts, so please just stop.
DatGuyYouKnow
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Haha yeah i know i know.. Its just i was on deviant art and the stock really caught my eye and imagination even though it was really low res :L Thanks for commenting though il try make higher res photos from now on :)Stryking wrote:Should be a higher res
xNFx Monsta
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Made two new Photomanipulations.
-Pool of youth-
https://i.servimg.com/u/f19/18/74/12/41/wonder14.jpg
-The red grove-
https://i.servimg.com/u/f19/18/74/12/41/wonder17.jpg
-Edit
Im not sure why but when i try to upload the second photomanipulation it comes out really low res and blurry o-o ??
maybe il try again later, it definitely doesn't actually look like that xD
-Pool of youth-
https://i.servimg.com/u/f19/18/74/12/41/wonder14.jpg
-The red grove-
https://i.servimg.com/u/f19/18/74/12/41/wonder17.jpg
-Edit
Im not sure why but when i try to upload the second photomanipulation it comes out really low res and blurry o-o ??
maybe il try again later, it definitely doesn't actually look like that xD
xNFx Monsta
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