Need feedback on Edit I made :P

I don't know I was bored wanted to improve my editing skills so I jumbled up a bunch of CE footage and made this. Criticism and feedback needed please!

Your camera angles need some serious work, maybe some of those clips could be made to be more entertaining, but overall its just really work that's needed on those camera angles.

Editing could be fancier but I don't quite see the need. You could otherwise ask Neesy to teach you the way of weird montage edits.

R93_Sniper wrote:Your camera angles need some serious work, maybe some of those clips could be made to be more entertaining, but overall its just really work that's needed on those camera angles.

Editing could be fancier but I don't quite see the need. You could otherwise ask Neesy to teach you the way of weird montage edits.

Yeah I was planning on plugging in my Xbox controller to have smoother camera controls but it was to hard to map and I didn't have time lol

I need Better clips obviously
Better Camera Angles
Fancier edits (Neesy halp)

Thing is I'm planning on making lots of Halo 5 edits when it drops I had a lot fun making this other edit with H2 Anniversary feel free to criticize this one too :D

DreuxPhoenix wrote:Say, anyone know how to get Halo Custom Edition? I downloaded it from the website, but it asked me for that five piece code that would be located on the back of a PC game case. :(

You need a product key  I have mine in my case lying around somewhere...
but anyhow you can input any previously used key and you will still be able to play the game BUT you won't be able to Host your own Servers :P

DreuxPhoenix wrote:I went to a site with product keys, it no work. All I wanna do is have fun on another halo title. WHY DOES THE INTERNET UNIVERSE HATE ME!!

Try this one buddy V84H7-J62Y4-HTMHK-RKH6T-BHXHW

See RMT, the main issue is that your camera work is really shoddy in terms of speed and angles. Your pan shots should either have rotation centers that the camera follows and doesn't deviate from, or should be a simple pan shot without any rotation. Trying to combine them both doesn't look nice and instead makes the shot look really bleh and unprofessional. Also that random zooming you do wont help your case either as it's going to consistently break the flow of the camera.

Smooth, flowing camera shots are what you want to aim for. Jerky motion isn't what you wanna hit here.

Perfectly honest:
Your cinematics are pretty poor, the camera movement and angles ar epretty bad.
There's no synch or flow to your edit whatsoever, it's just music with footage slapped on-top.
A lot of the effects feel out-of-placed / not needed.

A good effort none-the-less.

I feel like a big improvement could be made if you just remove the 'artificial jaggies' effect from many of your shots. Also, shorten it a little, a good concise montage wins over a drawn-out one any day.

Neesy wrote:Perfectly honest:
Your cinematics are pretty poor, the camera movement and angles ar epretty bad.
There's no synch or flow to your edit whatsoever, it's just music with footage slapped on-top.
A lot of the effects feel out-of-placed / not needed.

A good effort none-the-less.

Ayy thanks for the honesty xD